A descriptive piece of changes that happened on : First Day Of Spring
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I have never seen a third grader write like that before! I loved the way you described the setting without saying the obvious. You told it through the actions of your characters. This allowed us to see the images in our minds. I will read all of your pieces. You can publish and draw all your stories and get them published in a hardcover book for $20.00 about each. It makes a great gift for relatives and friends- especially if they are in your stories! I look forward to seeing your books in the future. I know you will be an author and __________, one day. You can be more than one thing in life.